Monday 8 March 2021

Cook's cove walk

 Thursday morning were waiting for the bell to ring 5 minute later it rang when the teacher was saying what groups I got there people  going into my dad's car we start up then were on the road again with two people be very annoying all the way then we finally get there with every waiting there for us because we had go the loo first then koka nira put us in walking groups I was with one person I could talk to that was jackson m we start going up sing file we walk up stairs it was tiring but there was shade so that help then the top I could see the light we made it but I new some there was more coming more walking so we stop talk about the statue up there it was called the statue of light



We ceped on moving on the organ trail we walk and walk for agis then we made to a fence that we went over yay a two second rest then we made it to another fence another two second  rest  we walk until we found a stone path we walk down then there was a look out I sore a water the ocean but that was only half of it so we walk down stair it was like a bush walk we went a bit more down uitle we stop to talk on the bush next to me there was a spider web but in was in a round ball shape we walk on the bring then off the bring then we were here out of the bushes then we had to wait because every boy had to go to the loo then we cared on this organ trail walk then we got to the spot captain cook stopped to dock the ship so we had a feed here we cam pack we walk all the way back up the stairs up the hill down the hill  down the stairs then back we talk for a little while then we hoped back in the car then back to school. I love doing but the stairs

and I had a good time  


1 comment:

  1. Hi, Ivy here. Taimana, I really liked your Cooks Cove writing but I couldn't read it. Next time, can you reread your work because you were missing punctuation, some of your words were not spelled correctly and you need to check if your writing makes sense! Over all your writing was great!

    From Ivy

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