What I learned this week that writing structure and that rugby tackle is fun to play with lot's of people and I hurt getting from what I sore I'm cida good running thru every one.
Maths Whizz I got all four gems in a day And learnt more about clocks and divens and had lot of fun.
Hi, Ivy here. Taimana, I like the way you added full stops and capital letters where they needed to go. Your blog reminds me of when I tried out rugby, I bet you are way better that me! Next time, re-read your blog to check if it makes sense. Who did you play rugby with? bye!
ReplyDeleteHi Taimana,I like how you write about what you learned and how it is fun to play tackle rugby with lots of people I also think it would be more fun too. My advice is that maybe you could write a little more and add some punctuation, you should also re-read what you had written in this blog post.
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