Thursday 19 November 2020

Craft fair

 On the 13th of November  we got ready for the craft fair, a school  event  we have ever year at Wainui   Beach School. Every year we  have food fizz and drinks and bounce castle but this year we did't have evony shops  but It was still great me and my dad help set up table.

 A little while later all of the shop that the teacher do got set up and the bounce cattle to then it hit four a clock around five minutes past and lot's people were here. My dad gave me 20  dollar to spent I sore waffle yum they were out side   room 9 they smelt great and they let you put cholcel sauce on so I put a lot on it taste and felt soft so good  then I sore they had another thing going called the lucky dip something like that so it was  five dollar for one  pick so how it work is there is present in a  box we lots of cut up paper then you put your and pull it out I got a yoyo and nots and cross not the best then I spent the rest of on a ticket so I hoped on the bouncy castle.


  I just stayed on it for like ten minutes then my sister came so I came with her to the waffle  because she wanted me to so I did then herd  my friend Troy and Jandre we played on the bonce castle the we did wona thos ball games with my sister then my other friend raff came and we played and game of the ball game then he went home and troy and Jandere then me and my sister  and dad went home.

 after that I felt tied  I loved the craft fair cant wait for next year

1 comment:

  1. Hi, Ivy here. Taimana, in your work I liked how you added even the most smallest details into your writing like how you played on different equipment and your friends Troy, Jandre and Raphi turned up. Your blog about the craft fair reminded me of when I went to the craft fair and saw all of my friends turn up! It's really lucky that you got 20 dollars! When your dad said it was time to go, did you wish you could stay longer? I always wish I could stay longer!

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